| 2005-05-07 03:19:32 |
Summer Night
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One of the best stories i have ever read. You used great spelling with very little mistakes. There was romance.. which always spices up a story. I just have to say it was excellent man. Great job. keep on writing. |
| 2005-05-07 11:59:34 |
Summer Night
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Nice story, crappy punctuation. |
| 2005-05-07 12:23:45 |
Summer Night
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I didn't really feel this story.How you gonna fuck your sister. 2/10 |
| 2005-05-08 10:13:08 |
Summer Night
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You never fucked your sister, Lover? you don't know what you missed. I got my first sister when she was 9, and had to wait for my second til she was 15. Broke both their cherries with my cock; lots of blood, lots of spunk. Never the same again. |
| 2005-05-08 14:53:24 |
Summer Night
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That was good. Makee more. |