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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-05-04 11:13:00 | Twisted Sister Part One | so boring , stupid fuck , wake up and write somthing that can make me hard |
| 2005-05-04 17:15:00 | Twisted Sister Part One | got whiplash from sudden tense shift. ow! |
| 2005-05-05 23:41:34 | Twisted Sister Part One | Jesus Christos! You start out in first person then bam! The story's in third person. Nice (lack of) punctuation as well. "This story is fiction." So is your writing talent. |
| 2005-05-06 06:58:49 | Twisted Sister Part One | snorr! |
| 2005-05-06 13:36:56 | Twisted Sister Part One | that story was so hard 2 finish try again 3/10 |