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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-04-30 17:11:13 | Twisted Sister Part One | lbah, blah, blan |
| 2005-05-01 22:13:04 | Twisted Sister Part One | boring i fell asleep |
| 2005-05-01 23:50:17 | Twisted Sister Part One | You achieve a level of perfection I find myself unable to explain. The story had both an interreting plot and vivid detail, keep going. 10/10 |
| 2005-05-02 01:27:57 | Twisted Sister Part One | the plot and structure was ok,but your grammar was sadly lacking proper form.improve that and it would be an excellent story instead of a "not bad" story |
| 2005-05-02 05:26:15 | Twisted Sister Part One | liked it, need comma's though |