| 2005-06-23 07:50:20 |
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damn good story. great deatail and description. i agree with fuckhead. the rape was a little much...maybe if he had masked his identity. made it look like some one snuck in. other than that. wonderful. keep it up. |
| 2005-06-23 08:39:03 |
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Oh yes, replying my thoughts to a story makes me a noob. get a life. |
| 2005-06-23 12:08:48 |
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i personaly liked tha story bro the rape at the end kinda caught me off gaurd but i really liked tha rest of tha story |
| 2005-06-23 12:28:59 |
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Great story. I liked the rape scene unlike the rest of em. It was very good. All i want to know is what happens after the rape. Does he kill her. Does he let her go. Does she tell her parents. cmon. |
| 2005-06-24 02:18:54 |
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hey spaz shut up... see this story is what we call fictional, which means ITS NOT REAL, im shure funboy dosent rape little girls so just shut up cus you make yourself look stupid, and as for you funboy its a great story well written just change the one~two to a one~six or somthing to shut these dickheads up |