| 2005-06-19 22:54:16 |
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omg this story is disturbing! yea it was interesting but my gosh couldnt mike find someone his own fuckin agE! thats jus suck.. im sorry but if this turns u on or gives u "pleasure" then u have somethin wrong with U! u needa jus go 2 hell for this mike! FUCK U |
| 2005-06-20 08:15:48 |
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u should make a part 2 starting in the morning and you should be fucking her when her mum comes to pick her up, let her catch you and then ill leave the rest up to your imagination, 10/10, excellent story dude |
| 2005-06-20 14:13:52 |
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fantastic story. I hope you write a 2nd part there are many possibilities. Hopefully no rape though. |
| 2005-06-21 04:52:31 |
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damn man that was wonderful....lost me at the end with the rape part tho |
| 2005-06-21 09:19:31 |
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That was so hot...Keep up the writing. Drop the rape, though, next time. |