| 2005-06-22 00:06:03 |
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I bob will say this story gets a high 10/10 because of the detail that was put into it i read the whole stroy and say few errors of gammer and spellin and for the dickheads that bitch about it being bad because of the ass rape then fuck you if think about it, it wasnt really rape they were taken basic parts in a role(i.e. raper and victom) , and agian great story |
| 2005-06-22 00:10:57 |
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My god that was amazing. You have a real talent for writing, I agree with VZ the best story on this site, my arm kills from beating so many times, WRITE PART 2 !!!! |
| 2005-06-22 03:22:25 |
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Hello there its a Best story i have ever Read |
| 2005-06-22 03:25:12 |
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that was the sound my dick hit my desk when i read this story a specialy the deep thtoart parts!!!!! |
| 2005-06-22 04:27:03 |
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i like the story alot but it got really boriing after awihle but it was still an amazing story u no |