| 2005-07-21 00:00:19 |
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Ok, first of all, yes, this story is good. i'll almost say it's great. And for all the idiots who whine about her age, they should considerthe describtion before reading it.
However, it was truly redundant, aside from a few exceptions, it was just the same or almost the same situation everytime. The first time, ok, the second works too, but then it starts to get repetitive. Also, adjectives are also way too numerous. sexy goddess, etc. We get the idea.
That last scene was nothing near enjoyable, to tell the truth. You could have used anal to make a MUCH better scene. Anyways, aside from that, the story was very good, but the more it went the boringer it became.
generous 8/10 from me. |