| 2005-07-12 09:47:06 |
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it was a well written story, a lot of variety and it was a little more unique then several other peices i have read. i believe the store clerk chick should have joined in for a nice twist but it was your story...id say its a 9 out of 10. i was definatly happy with it |
| 2005-07-12 14:11:57 |
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One of the best storys i`ve ever read!!!! |
| 2005-07-12 20:21:12 |
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it should not be rated this high. My stories are just as good, 1/10 |
| 2005-07-13 12:42:45 |
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very good voor some 1 how does not right stories for a living |
| 2005-07-13 14:34:18 |
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Did you realize Mandy said "I shouldn't use the pool without MANDY being here"? She IS Mandy? How gay is that. |