2005-07-17 20:05:06 |
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this story was good and everything but the girl was only twelve and that was DISGUSTING! gross. u should've made her at least 16 and that would've been okay. if ur really a child molestor then u SUCK! |
2005-07-18 01:11:05 |
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It was a great read. Reminded of things from the past. Maybe add a little more so it doesn't end with Mandy crying in a pillow. Besides that it was great. |
2005-07-18 02:50:33 |
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Great story. Don't listen to these people. |
2005-07-18 22:06:22 |
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Fisrt off all, good story. U could have made it a little shorter, i mean my eyes were hurtin from lookin at the page for so long. 2nd, next time make the girl a lil' older, i mean 12 is jst a little young. 3rd dont keep talkin about the 10 in cock. i mean sure guys like to brag but they stop at the 2nd time unless they're asked. other than that it was good. if u take WHO's advice your storys will be really good. especially the older than 12 part. u dont want to look like a child molester. any way 8/10 |
2005-07-19 04:03:20 |
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dude that was the greatest story ever |