| 2005-07-15 09:57:09 |
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you need to have your dick cut off for this one |
| 2005-07-15 13:14:36 |
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i just gave up reading this story because 1. it is extremely too long 2. the girl is only twelve for god sakes! and 3. i know u have fiction written there, but this seems more like a fantasy and thats just totally wrong. i mean dude come on. yuck! |
| 2005-07-16 00:20:29 |
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Very long and very boring. 3/10 |
| 2005-07-16 01:05:36 |
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Thanks for ruining my birthday with that story, you asshole, now I can't have birthday cake without blowing chunks |
| 2005-07-16 02:57:47 |
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i really loved the story.... but i do think that the girl was too young, next time make the girl older, at least 16! |