| 2005-12-14 21:55:13 |
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that was great man!
I love kids (a little too much?)
long story but definitely the best ever written!
20/10
keep it up, Funboy!! |
| 2005-12-17 01:50:34 |
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woulda been decent if you hadn't included the sick ass, fucked up ending. what' a way to ruin a perfectly good erection. |
| 2005-12-17 15:17:57 |
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great story, but what'a up with that sick ending? Get rid of that, and its the best story ever written. |
| 2005-12-26 02:22:57 |
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Yo this is the best story every written, its hot, its long but its worth readin the whole thing... i love it write more stories like this one ........ keep up the good work |
| 2005-12-27 00:56:04 |
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I really lvoe this story, it's actually my favorite. I just don't really 'get' the ending... how she was yelling for him to fuck her ass, and then like, right after she cried herself to sleep. |