| 2006-01-13 23:47:25 |
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good, but i didnt like the end. it was very confusing. Otherwise it was a great story keep it up!! |
| 2006-02-07 19:37:01 |
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Wow! that was awesome! |
| 2006-02-13 20:47:25 |
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Not realistic - but it's the writers freedom. I didn't like the end. But this story is written very good, And it's damn hot , even if I didn't agree with the idea of fucking kids ! 8/10 |
| 2006-02-27 15:43:08 |
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Too long. Goes on forever. A little unbelieveable as well. But enjoy the seduction. |
| 2006-02-28 12:24:08 |
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That story was amesome. One of the best I've read. I give it a 11 out of 10. |