| 2006-01-02 15:55:06 |
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Hey man please write another part of this story, my friends (my girlfriend) and me are waiting for it lol. we love your work please write more with more sex, a story that doesnt end....... |
| 2006-01-04 20:11:27 |
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I loved it man end was odd but i still loved it 10/10 |
| 2006-01-07 22:25:20 |
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This story was copied from another website and it wasn't written by this writer. What gives? 3/10 |
| 2006-01-12 16:23:27 |
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let's see what's wrong with this story. the whole thing is bery unrealistic. Parents leaving their child unattended with a stranger alone? And then there's the part of him being a pedefile. You're very sick to write this, or what I see from the other comment it says you plagiarized it. |
| 2006-01-12 19:01:33 |
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best story I've read in alone time its good story write more......bill |