| 2005-12-27 15:25:06 |
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well uh, the ending kinda ruined it, but the rest was good. |
| 2005-12-27 17:56:13 |
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Brilliant. I think there's scope for another story yet! Took me 2 hours to read it, i'm still flushed!! |
| 2005-12-27 19:52:17 |
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well... it was ok. I agree that it is totally sick to fuck little kids, and the end was horrible and confusing as hell... i cant really say i liked it... |
| 2005-12-29 20:16:52 |
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little long, but still good 8/10 |
| 2006-01-01 05:49:13 |
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hey my ass still hurts from that |