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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-06-15 21:58:42 | Forbidden Chapter 1 | it'agood start |
| 2006-07-13 16:36:21 | Forbidden Chapter 1 | ch 2 could make it ok |
| 2008-01-12 13:33:39 | Forbidden Chapter 1 | perhapps you should make small notes about your carecters. In the second paragraph you said mindy tamaras sister was 18 2 1/2 years older then tamara. But the begining of the third paragraph you said tamara was 17 Well youyou do the math it dosen't add up |
| 2005-08-01 22:39:12 | Forbidden Chapter 2 | On this forum you need to combine one and two and if there is a 3rd with actual sex add that to the other two. Looks like it might be a good story but yu will lose them after chapter two. |
| 2005-08-11 02:10:50 | Forbidden Chapter 2 | Good story, just not enough sex, unless you want a big finale. keep the writing up |