| 2006-07-13 16:41:52 |
Forbidden Chapter 2
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it's getting a little better make the story alittle longer and more detail |
| 2007-08-21 04:11:30 |
Forbidden Chapter 2
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Two hours of hot water? This IS fiction! |
| 2005-08-03 05:44:57 |
Forbidden Chappter 3
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Is this your virgin effort? this story could have been exciting except i've read it better elsewher. |
| 2005-08-05 21:03:31 |
Forbidden Chappter 3
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you almost had it''' should have kept up with the little bitch begging and dad should have slapped the little slut across the lips with his cock and said''slut you don't get to suck or fuck this cock until you bring over your girlfiend with the biggest tits and you fuckin suck those tits in front of me |
| 2005-08-10 02:56:30 |
Forbidden Chappter 3
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I liked it. The nuances of threlationship, cuppled with THE GAME were very well put together. It read like a side story of a very realistic soap. Nice... |