| 2005-08-03 16:06:28 |
My niece Sally, We've had better days
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Part 4 is finished and submitted... It will be posted soon |
| 2005-08-04 09:53:33 |
My niece Sally, We've had better days
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Titman probably needs to go to the book store and stay out of the adult book store. Reading smut is great, reading smut that is well written is better. Bravo Mate!!! Keep up the good work |
| 2005-08-04 13:59:25 |
My niece Sally, We've had better days
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i like the deriction the story is going cont and if you make a novel just the better |
| 2005-08-05 00:30:52 |
My niece Sally, We've had better days
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i loved the earlier parts and this one looks to set up a great story good job |
| 2005-08-05 02:30:20 |
My niece Sally, We've had better days
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i said dont listen to titman and i am very serious yet again, he is a moron. it is a good story, its realistic...except for the divorce...no divorce is that easy...but i do agree with everyone...more sex...i think there was only one sex scene in this entire story...what the hell dude?...but im happy with your story believe me...7/10 its not your best work |