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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-10-03 16:31:23 | My Daughter Jen | The sex was OK, but the story was really (dare I say) boring. The dialogue was really simple (are you enjoying my blow job daddy?) and the sentences were short and choppy. The structure was nice, it was easy to read, and there were a few good parts, but all and all, eh, not great. It almost seemed as if you plugged a few details into an erotica bot and this is what it churned out. |
| 2005-10-03 16:45:14 | My Daughter Jen | the story didnt flow and i gave up like a quarter the wat thru...not as good as ur other stuff |
| 2005-10-03 19:58:12 | My Daughter Jen | How did she go from sucking off both guys to getting her father to fucker so fast? |
| 2005-10-03 21:08:27 | My Daughter Jen | absolutely wonderful hope part two is in the future |
| 2005-10-04 00:09:50 | My Daughter Jen | hey ur son will be screwing ur wife thats y u divorced u sick bastard, |