| 2005-10-07 00:15:45 |
Fantasy about my girlfriend
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SLOW DOWN!!!!!! i started and befor i knew it i could see the yellow at the bottom of the screen u had a good story idea keep it down. plz right again. 6/10 |
| 2005-10-15 19:57:01 |
Fantasy about my girlfriend
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Great Story,... too fast but good. Write more. |
| 2005-10-23 09:29:08 |
Fantasy about my girlfriend
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It started off very well, but hurried at the end. |
| 2005-12-02 01:26:44 |
Fantasy about my girlfriend
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BOOOOOOO |
| 2006-01-01 23:12:02 |
Fantasy about my girlfriend
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hA HA HA THAT SUCKS |