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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-23 17:05:13 | Part 4 – My graduation party | 89 |
| 2005-10-10 18:03:02 | babysitting my babysister | This story really is crap. It's way to short, your descriptions are flat and uninteresting and you type like your chatting with someone. PLZZZZ is not english. You write like english is not your first language. And there are typos everwhere. If you do continue it, learn how to write before submitting another chapter. Or at the very least learn to use grammer correctly. -s- |
| 2005-10-10 18:26:35 | babysitting my babysister | storywise, It started out nice with a good buildup but you went too fast to the action |
| 2005-10-10 23:17:40 | babysitting my babysister | the story was good, but you wrote it like you never finished the fourth grade |
| 2005-10-11 00:49:48 | babysitting my babysister | second all three statements |