| 2005-11-23 19:46:20 |
My baby's cuming to visit
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that was great but let the gril have some control once in a while |
| 2005-12-02 14:58:30 |
My baby's cuming to visit
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it was good but how about some dialogue? |
| 2005-12-07 15:58:46 |
My baby's cuming to visit
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please please pleeeease space out ur stories wid proper small paragraphs, and more dialogue, 8/10 |
| 2006-12-19 13:38:02 |
My baby's cuming to visit
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Good story, spread out paragraphs, easier to read, and may I fuck your lil slut too? |
| 2007-06-10 02:38:04 |
My baby's cuming to visit
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teacher go back and teach the third grade chester |