| 2005-11-29 22:46:18 |
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nice story but it started out as a possible lesbian encounter and ended with incest. anyway it still rocked my cock. 9/10 |
| 2005-11-30 11:43:17 |
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Ashlee was panting hard, ready to orgasm from the kiss!!!!!!!!!! WTF is this supposed to mean?????
You need to work on ur writing skills........good story nonetheless |
| 2005-12-03 17:22:00 |
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Yes, definitly write more just slow down on the sex stuff, make it last with more description, but this was good stuff 8/10 |
| 2005-12-04 15:42:55 |
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sensual 9/10 |
| 2005-12-05 02:13:26 |
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hey, not too bad, but the ending coulda been better, 7/10 |