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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-11-29 22:31:25 | Detention_(0) | 1/10 I believe my dead grandma could have done better then that, and she was mental.... You need a lot of work |
| 2005-11-29 23:06:09 | Detention_(0) | seems fake... |
| 2005-11-29 23:09:30 | Detention_(0) | good job.. who cares about the grammar. he was banging his teacher! 6/10 |
| 2005-11-30 01:36:19 | Detention_(0) | I don't give two shits about your spelling & grammar, but the story is great no matter what some other fools say, keep up the good werk! OMG I SPELT WORK WONRG! |
| 2005-11-30 08:27:01 | Detention_(0) | There can be no doubt that misspelling and bad grammar detract from the enjoyment of a good story: they distract the mind away from the action. Similarly, paragraph breaks give the reader time to pause and take breath between different parts of the action. They allow the writer to change the tempo of the story, and they allow the characters to breath. Having said that, we must acknowledge that not everyone spells well or properly. Americans, for example, have no concept of spelling correctly. Spics speak so badly they couldn't possibly spell. In addition, not everyone has the education to understand paragraph breaks and other literary constructions. But anyone can learn, and many of the contributors here have made remarkable progress. |