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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-11-30 12:41:19 | Detention_(0) | great story |
| 2005-11-30 20:15:31 | Detention_(0) | One huge, gigantic paragraph. No breaks. No space. No breather. Jeeeeeeeeeezus. ... |
| 2005-11-30 20:45:07 | Detention_(0) | umm.......that was really baliveable |
| 2005-11-30 21:32:21 | Detention_(0) | Yea, although grammar can make a story hard to read, yours didnt have any spelling errors that I picked up on. the only thing is please break up the story into paragraphs. whenever i have to blink or scroll down or whatever I lose my place. very frustrating. it was a good story and you should make a part 2... |
| 2005-12-01 10:37:31 | Detention_(0) | this got 7.17???? omfg fuck this site its full of retards... i havnt even bothered reading this story its too fucking short that couldnt get anyone wet or hard... i give 0/10 and i havnt even bloody read it! |