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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-02-18 22:08:23 | Jordans First Kiss | i like it you really capture the essence of the sexual time between the 2 characters. Nicely donemake a second!! |
| 2006-03-22 06:54:34 | Jordans First Kiss | It was pretty good, I liked the overall theme you were trying to get. Could have been a little better, 7/10! |
| 2006-05-02 15:09:33 | Jordans First Kiss | write more descriptive more like talking between people during sex and stuff like that then it be good |
| 2006-05-15 00:07:08 | Jordans First Kiss | dude, that sucked dick! 1/10 |
| 2006-06-08 00:21:51 | Jordans First Kiss | Well, it's not as long as a lot of the others I've read, and you need more detail about what all happens. You didn't really give detail on the sex scence and that's the most important part!!!! Well, practice makes perfect, so keep writing! XO |