| 2006-12-13 17:54:44 |
Hotel Part 1 - Under The Table
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Delicious. Hot and amazingly sexy. Keep them cumming. Thanks. |
| 2006-01-16 21:29:42 |
Jane...The Never Ending Story
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2/10 |
| 2006-01-17 07:08:53 |
Jane...The Never Ending Story
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BAGH! THIS IS NOT A STORY |
| 2006-01-18 14:19:34 |
Jane...The Never Ending Story
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Yes, it is a very good, but short story..Let's see you do better... |
| 2006-03-12 11:22:26 |
Jane...The Never Ending Story
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I would like for the story to be longer. Also, the sex needs to be more descriptive. Can that be all there is? Basically, you need more detail. If you do not have the desire to make the store more real then maybe you should not waste your time (and more importantly my time) posting a story. I am giving this story a 7. I think with more effort it could be much better. Think about it... If it is worth doing then it is worth doing right. |