| 2006-11-08 17:07:30 |
Jordans First Kiss
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Totally aweful....!!!! Rotten even |
| 2006-11-13 00:30:43 |
Jordans First Kiss
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Absolutely horrible. Mechanics, spelling, story were all trash. You did not attend Harvard, and you never will. |
| 2006-12-06 21:14:46 |
Jordans First Kiss
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ur a virgin arnt u |
| 2007-02-24 21:15:31 |
Jordans First Kiss
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Gee thanks.... I wish there was a way to delete stories... I am ashamed to write this... and no..... Im not a virgin you ass hole |
| 2007-03-11 13:09:01 |
Jordans First Kiss
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i wanna go fuck my sister now, ill be back to read hopefully your second part. Although its want descriptive enough u got the idea, try gain youll get it. 8/10 |