| 2006-03-09 20:44:39 |
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When I post my next book....ya'all might like it better. :-)
Jmt |
| 2006-03-09 21:17:40 |
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I think the ending was nice. Do do a romantic story about jake and cindy that would be nice. title it something that we would reconigise so we can find it once its on here. |
| 2006-03-09 22:30:25 |
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that was a pretty good ending ...i hope you write more like that one ...all of them were pretty damm good....10/10..too bad what happen to bill,jessie,and yasuko tho........ |
| 2006-03-09 23:12:34 |
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for an ending, i would have liked Neil to haev survived, i mean he fucked those people once and they were to stupid to realize it, have him fuck them all agian. Neil has jessie the hottest girl around and all the money he needs, you can even make a good post scipt to go with it |
| 2006-03-09 23:44:07 |
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The End Was Sort Of Anti-climactic, You Figured Neil Was Going To Die, But Nonetheless, I Loved Every Part Of It. |