| 2006-03-10 14:02:22 |
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Jmt I think you did a great job thru-out the story. Don't listen to the others, keep writing just the way you want to. Can't wait for the next one. |
| 2006-03-10 15:06:24 |
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I love justice and you gave it to us, great sex and justice. Thank you. Please more about Jake and Cindy. Love your writting.... |
| 2006-03-10 15:21:40 |
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DUDE THAT WAS FUCKED UP! i got mixed emotions over the ending, i can see where neil was coming from at the beginning and the power corrupting him is so believable, but at the same time, he was a fucking asshole and deserved it! also, the ending was ironically funny and twisted for neil, kinda sweet but scary for jake and cindy. i can just see cindy becoming another neil because of all of this shit |
| 2006-03-10 16:51:32 |
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Great story, great ending! |
| 2006-03-10 18:57:43 |
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ahhhh man i thought neil was gonna kill every one but jessie and take over the company that was paying him....... but whatever great story |