| 2006-04-11 03:09:56 |
The New House Rules
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Storyline is good, needs to be longer, ages are a bit young!!! writing needs improving |
| 2006-04-24 20:26:11 |
The New House Rules
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It was pretty good, more about the boy though. I want to no more about the boy :) |
| 2006-05-20 16:16:25 |
The New House Rules
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Good story but the writing needs improvement. |
| 2006-05-21 16:18:26 |
The New House Rules
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The writing sucked, but the idea was ok. |
| 2006-06-05 00:45:23 |
The New House Rules
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great story wish I has to hot daughters like that |