| 2007-03-13 05:33:30 |
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dude, what are you doing? there's like, good spelling, and grammar and actual plot and dialogue... what are you, high? seriously though, fucking great story and awesome ending. Three thumbs up. Well, two of them are thumbs... |
| 2007-03-19 17:00:18 |
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the story line is perfect, the grammars perfect, the sex is perfect there's just one small mistake, sometimes you forget which charcter your about talking and type in the wrong name, example:"Meanwhile Jessie had made a breakthrough and cracked Neil’s code almost immediately" |
| 2007-03-23 21:19:35 |
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I guess that proves I'm not perfect, but then I never claimed that I was. |
| 2007-04-11 18:36:00 |
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Monotonous in the middle, but awesome ending! |
| 2007-05-01 18:32:30 |
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3 words is all this needs: SO FOOKIN AWSOME !!!!!! |