| 2006-04-12 20:11:31 |
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I have truelly enjoyed this story and I have to agree with the others this would make a hell of a porno, If you ever make this a book that can be bought I would love a copy of it! |
| 2006-05-31 07:39:56 |
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i wanted neil to win... |
| 2006-06-15 23:29:45 |
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excellent stories, jmt. l was hoping for a twist ending though. Like, if it turned out that Bill(when doing Jessie) was actually Neil. In that bill was the that was going to kill that rich guy.
ive read everyone, jmt, you are a very talented auther. |
| 2006-06-21 00:14:54 |
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Very nice story. The only bad part was the gore at the end. Publish it. |
| 2006-06-28 23:11:31 |
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great story, with the exception of the end which was sick. I think you overdid it with the gore at the end. really good overall though. The beginning chapters were better than those later on in my opinion. You should try to publish it if you can extend the story. |