| 2007-06-24 00:38:19 |
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i believe you have a true gift as a writer....well
done |
| 2007-08-14 19:52:35 |
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it had a scarface stile ending with a big twist truely a great story. im a little sad though that niel died...i guess the scarface syndrum got me. if this was made into a movie i think it could be one of those "eternally remembered" movies that sets the trend and for movies to come after
good fucking job |
| 2007-09-10 19:37:38 |
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THat was the oddest story I've ever read. Not satisfactory, but good. |
| 2007-09-17 13:51:06 |
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as sick as it sounds i was rooting 4 neil |
| 2007-10-18 21:45:47 |
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I think it had a Perfect Ending |