| 2006-04-06 16:39:38 |
sherrie my teen toy
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not bad other than some spelling and puntuation i thought it was good for a first story |
| 2006-04-06 18:56:03 |
sherrie my teen toy
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dude that was some really bad grammar but alright story |
| 2006-04-06 19:26:04 |
sherrie my teen toy
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so wait.... how old was this chick? the daughter? |
| 2006-04-07 05:06:36 |
sherrie my teen toy
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you don't go to jail for writting good stories. |
| 2006-04-07 10:35:26 |
sherrie my teen toy
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You should have made her age 17 this wa it would not have so twiisted. you should have had her come on to you. write part two see how much better you can get |