| 2006-09-28 02:02:53 |
sherrie my teen toy
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Good story but not excellent, to be that it needs more description |
| 2007-07-05 08:53:26 |
sherrie my teen toy
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Not a bad story line but you are Crap at writing. Learn about gramar and how to use a spell checker and things could improve. 4/10 for effort. |
| 2006-04-07 01:07:37 |
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..... excellent ..... |
| 2006-04-07 05:50:12 |
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Delightful spring break story. The Dick Slapper totally loved it. Welldone! 10/10 |
| 2006-04-07 15:49:55 |
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Great spring break story loved every min. of it thank you.. whens the next one coming |