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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-11-25 16:55:21 | The New Slave | Sorry, could not finish the story, which I am sure was memorable - stumbling syntax, grammar, and spelling created too many potholes for this poor vehicle to negotiate - 18 you say, as in years? |
| 2007-12-24 10:25:21 | The New Slave | good story - but english and grammar ... |
| 2007-12-25 03:10:59 | The New Slave | Good fucking god... I stopped reading it. Learn how to spell for fuck sake and your grammar, is appauling. |
| 2008-03-27 13:23:09 | The New Slave | that was good as hell . hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... |
| 2008-03-31 15:43:03 | The New Slave | nice story, though I've never seen anyone writing with such a poor english. I mean, even foreign children with only 2 years of English classes can do better ! |