| 2007-08-03 06:54:39 |
And I didn't even get her name!
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| 2007-10-14 22:08:57 |
And I didn't even get her name!
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I laughed my ass off...but I loved the storie.....hehe...that poor....erm lucky kid got raped by a hot asain chick...haha, wow I wish my childhood could be as good as that....though...thats 1 in a million |
| 2006-07-03 12:07:51 |
Jamie's First sexual encounter
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Geez, this was crummy. Proofread your stories before you post them. The beginning was so confusing that I almost clicked out. I wish I would have. It kept getting worse as it went on. A 13 yo w/D-cups, take an anaotmy lesson kid. The last paragraph looked like some sort of biblical rant. I dont ever want to have an unbearable orgasm, sounds dangerous. The language was juvenile, just abyssmal. Rid you of bowel movements?!?! Dude, Nobody wants to read your jack-off fanasies if they are no better than this. Try again. |
| 2006-07-03 12:26:15 |
Jamie's First sexual encounter
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BRILLIANT this was absolutely awesome. You have to write a sequel to this with maybe some shower action involved or maybe some of the younger sisters friends either way there has got to be more |
| 2006-07-04 01:17:23 |
Jamie's First sexual encounter
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Sad. A bit of eroticism, but who is really interested in girls getting each other off. I do not think that even a Lesbian would enjoy reading such inaccurate material. Come to think of it, would not have been any better if it was boy and girl. The idea of reading sex stories is to be turned-on. This story served to turn me off! |