| 2006-07-04 03:10:06 |
...And every girl in the family.
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this is fucking grose as hell you insest fucker your so fucking nasty and your going to hell for this bitch |
| 2006-07-04 03:51:04 |
...And every girl in the family.
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who cares about all the technical shit? jesus christ |
| 2006-07-04 17:04:03 |
...And every girl in the family.
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We do chief, thats why people post here, now get a handle and post something, or shut the hell up. |
| 2006-07-04 21:38:00 |
...And every girl in the family.
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Thanks to everyone for the comments, good or bad! I'll try to apply these in the next chapters of the story. |
| 2006-07-07 22:08:15 |
...And every girl in the family.
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You do have some talent, but when you write a story write on something you know about. It is evident you have never fucked a virgin or an eleven year old. When you describe a sex scene go into a little detail such as her bald hairless pussy, or describe her nipples. An eleven year old is going to have a lot of pain when a big cock enters her vagina because most eleven year old vaginas are not fully developed. Clean it up and you will get a much better mark when he fucks his sister and mother right? |