| 2006-07-09 23:02:53 |
...And every girl in the family.
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i agree with Archaic i managed to finish the story only because i want people to have great stories. (blah blah blah). but really reread and if you want to write some stories go to other authors see how they write. (DO NOT COPY THEM). just see what they do in these situations see how they write their stories and learn. not everyone is made to write but you can learn. good story line. AND YES THERE SHOULD HAVE BEEN A HYMEN. one last question though, um how many people actually use the word ejaculate? and at that age who the hell lasts for 25 min?!?!?! seiously ive had my fair share of sex but 25 min and my own dick feels like its about to break off. cmon man try to make it at least a bit realistic. |
| 2006-07-11 00:40:07 |
...And every girl in the family.
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My cock is so hard and still hard after jerking it off 6 times. Wish it was my mature dick fucking your little ll yr old. mmmmmmmmmm |
| 2006-07-23 16:53:39 |
...And every girl in the family.
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REALLY SHITTY |
| 2006-09-05 08:53:26 |
...And every girl in the family.
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learn to write asshole and yas this is the fucking sickest shit i've EVER seen |
| 2006-09-05 20:26:49 |
...And every girl in the family.
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as if.... |