| 2006-07-11 14:49:17 |
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In addition tothe spelling, punctuation and paragraph, I can't understand why she'd be concerned about having some clothes on if someone comes in. I mean, anyone coming in would be able to tell that the two of you weren't involved in "normal" teacher-student interaction. Otherwise not too bad. |
| 2006-07-26 05:36:51 |
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Go and learn English somewhere. Illiterate asshole! |
| 2006-12-22 14:34:25 |
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it was good, but learn how to write buddy k? |
| 2007-04-24 20:27:01 |
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I'm surprised math was te only thing your failing |
| 2006-10-03 15:18:14 |
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The only thing I'd do different is separate each short better. It was almost nauseating realising all of a sudden I was reading a different story. Still, not bad at all, keep it up! |