| 2006-07-16 00:03:27 |
His Property Part Three
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Goood but not chapter level. give us more and nastier than chapter two. |
| 2006-07-10 12:51:59 |
The Seductress-Eileen
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This story was really really good. It had a story line and was absolutely amazing. It actually had the sensuality that some stories on here lack between women. Great!!!!!! 10/10. |
| 2006-07-12 04:52:51 |
The Seductress-Eileen
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great story get a part 2 in like asap |
| 2006-07-12 23:46:56 |
The Seductress-Eileen
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Pretty nice. Eileen's change of mood was too sudden though, i think. Other than that, good writing. 9 |
| 2006-07-10 12:03:07 |
Hot for Teacher_(1)
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learn to use actual, complete sentences...other than that, the story wasn't bad. |