| 2006-10-03 19:02:30 |
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Do you know how to put together a complete sentence? great idea, but.... |
| 2006-10-06 08:58:28 |
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If you're aiming to write a story you need to pay attention to transitions between scenes. |
| 2006-10-12 15:44:11 |
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Yeah. I agree with them...It was great, you just need to separate the story one way or another...That made it very confusing, but very, very hot...Had me licking my lips, so keep up the work...;) |
| 2006-11-25 06:12:49 |
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Meh. 0/0 |
| 2006-12-29 21:34:17 |
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i read a bunch of your stories and what the hell is up with u and dogs it is like you take dogs up the butt or something it is werid |