| 2006-08-14 01:54:12 |
All in the family Chapter 1
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The content is hot, but your delivery is whack. Who wrote this, Les Nessman? I guess it worked since my pussy is twitching. |
| 2006-08-21 04:23:34 |
All in the family Chapter 1
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Great story, Terrible dialogue. |
| 2006-08-24 13:46:21 |
All in the family Chapter 1
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i thought it was a GREAT story, but the dialoque did suck. the way they talked with such detail made me think they were talking in mono-tone. but it was great and can't wait for chapter 2! |
| 2006-08-29 22:24:06 |
All in the family Chapter 1
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To repeat, where's cChapter 2? |
| 2006-09-07 01:14:10 |
All in the family Chapter 1
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This really fucking sucked sounded like they were teaching kindergarden |