| 2006-08-04 11:22:17 |
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Story flow needs work, and a proofreader, but, all in all, a decent story |
| 2006-08-05 08:38:24 |
All in the family Chapter 1
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so awesome!!! |
| 2006-08-05 14:26:04 |
All in the family Chapter 1
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i agree with the guy who wrote "weel golly gee" the dialouge was most definitly unbelievable |
| 2006-08-06 09:32:25 |
All in the family Chapter 1
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pish u sick perverts the fbi have bn tracing the lot of u fuck u see u in prisin pooper |
| 2006-08-07 01:51:56 |
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this isnt illegal u dumbfuck, u can read/draw/write whatever the fuck u want, its only in real life that u can get screwed |