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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-07-24 00:15:11 | All in the family Chapter 1 | great story, but too slowly unfolding. |
| 2006-07-24 04:49:59 | All in the family Chapter 1 | There's no natural lubrication in an anus, pussy lips aren't puffy because they're not virginal, and a guy with testicles the size of oranges couldn't walk! The story is wonderfully long, but the dialogue is unimaginably stiff, even if it is intended to be clinical, and to many elements of your sexual description are flat wrong! So much of it is so good, but the parts that are bad stick out even worse because of it. For example, bra sizes don't come in odd numbers. If you trust someone to proofread you story, the next one will turn out a lot better. Please write again. =dreamer= |
| 2006-07-24 05:35:33 | All in the family Chapter 1 | Knock it off with the "bitch" and "slut" talk. It's tacky and annoying. |
| 2006-07-24 11:07:43 | All in the family Chapter 1 | That was a long ass story man. I give it a 5. |
| 2006-07-24 12:23:48 | All in the family Chapter 1 | fuckin hot story 10/10 |