| 2006-08-09 10:53:58 |
All in the family Chapter 1
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I tell you, people just don't know how to enjoy a story without being overly critical. This is a good story. Continue on my friend. |
| 2006-08-09 20:38:26 |
All in the family Chapter 1
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That reminded me of one of those Cold War era instruction videos... |
| 2006-08-12 15:48:26 |
All in the family Chapter 1
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i have only one thing to say wheres cahpter 2 |
| 2006-08-13 01:14:25 |
All in the family Chapter 1
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Utterly fantastic. Quite unbelievable, but as hot as story as hot can be. Eager to see what subsequent chapters contain. |
| 2006-08-13 11:10:00 |
All in the family Chapter 1
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KEY-RIST ------ I wish I had a family like that. Difficult to believe that at 15 they were so naive being built the way they are. 10 outa 10 and looking forward to "the next day". |