| 2006-07-27 17:29:41 |
Captive Virgin
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dude...how many times did you change the J name? |
| 2006-07-28 03:33:56 |
Captive Virgin
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Okay...That's bullcrap with 5/10 and everything. This story was long, had long sex scenes, and the constant build-up with Barbie and the resulting end climax (no pun intended :P) was great. Especially the epilogue, how she had become just like the others, picking up kids near her age in almost the exact same situation. I tip my hat to you..Even if I'm not wearing one. Great story. 10/10 |
| 2006-07-28 15:46:25 |
Captive Virgin
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didn't have time to read it all, i'll come back later |
| 2006-07-29 09:22:19 |
Captive Virgin
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It was..rather boreing |
| 2006-07-29 19:18:29 |
Captive Virgin
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Excellent story! Loved how Barbie was teased to the breaking point....and the ending, wonderful. I look forward to more of your writing. |