| 2006-07-27 19:19:43 |
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Easy? Of course! Where would this place be without easy girls? *laughing* As far as the length goes, that's fair criticism. I'm never sure how long you guys' attention spans are. If it's any consolation, there are several more installments on the way, although Esperanza won't make another appearance until awhile later. |
| 2006-07-27 22:18:42 |
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this guy is a jerk. he needs a cattle prod shoved up his ass. i'd castrate my husband if i knew he put my lipstick on some other girl then screwed her. this guy is a real jackass, but the story was good. 8/10 |
| 2006-07-28 09:27:35 |
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Lovely story. I like those written by females, they are generally softer and less agressive than those by males. Just the way I like my sex (and I have tried both kinds myself). |
| 2006-07-28 10:27:38 |
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very good |
| 2006-07-28 16:30:54 |
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you forgot about your crotchless underwear and letting your dog lick you! that's illegal in the united states, by the way! |