| 2007-04-04 00:50:28 |
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Nice a bi better description of Esperanza would have been welcome |
| 2007-07-27 13:14:52 |
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Great story,better than all the other Latina ones.I love how you put reality into the story with the whole border thing.Counts as a stereotype in my book,but it doesn't take anything away from this marvelous story. |
| 2008-01-17 21:02:22 |
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Excellent writing style in fact the best i've seen on the site, but the story was rather short and there were no consequences for statutory rape! |
| 2008-04-09 12:47:36 |
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well .... not bad |
| 2008-04-09 15:52:30 |
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This was good. He made her into art |