| 2006-08-11 22:49:46 |
The Portrait - Part 1
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good story, needs a video, to go with it. |
| 2006-08-14 04:59:28 |
The Portrait - Part 1
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good story liked the hole idea however i wish there was more depth. idk why but i like knowing more about the characters then i realy get into the story |
| 2006-12-10 19:15:50 |
The Portrait - Part 1
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Very good, but I expected that, I read it from the list of your stories... Portrait was the key for me.. Well handled.. TR |
| 2007-01-23 09:33:39 |
The Portrait - Part 1
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Brilliant again! bc. |
| 2007-03-18 16:44:16 |
The Portrait - Part 1
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nice story. do write next on one some hot topic but a bit longer |